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Caring

Our lives are one of constant care, As we are always running from here to there, Yet the care we show is no care at all, Except for ourselves since Adam's fall, And still He came, His death and life for us to share.

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Date: 6/25/2010 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations in the winner circle, Daniel.
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Date: 6/25/2010 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations Daniel on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2010 5:37:00 AM
Congrats, Dan. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. Rgds, Ralph
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:02:00 PM
Congratulations Daniel. A worthy presentation with this fine poem. As you say mostly the care we take is the care for ourselves. Let us regain our consciousness of life itself, for the care we are taking is not life at all, but strife. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:44:00 AM
Great write for the contest!Celene!
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:21:00 AM
A wonderful entry in the contest. Good luck
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