Caricature of a Vamp

Sarah was always dressed in black,
and wearing that midnight pear bracelet
made me shiver spotting teeth marks on her neck;
was she a vamp ready to attack?


No, Sarah wasn't a beauty
neither sensual or attractive as Melody;
and what made hers stand out from other women, not looking for a kill,
was her macabre attire and her long eyelashes thicker than a cover girl!


Her destiny was controlled by an insatiable urge for blood which ended at daybreak,
at The Gentleman's Club she sought another victim to sink her teeth into his neck;
I kept yards away from her feeling she would suddenly attack and bite
and as strange as it seems, her hub was also a vampire she called, " Mike ".


The Poem Of The Vampire
written by Andrew Crisci
on 12/3/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 12/8/2013 4:35:00 PM
an interesting way to tell your tale, I enjoyed this one, Andrew. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew xx
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Date: 12/7/2013 4:59:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Andrew
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Date: 12/4/2013 9:35:00 PM
Lovely caricature of the vamp, Andrew
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