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Caress To Kiss

There's a fever on your lips tonight sshhhhh......I know I'm right, it's not narcissism, it's love's necessity, lay into me gently, speak with naked trust, tell me the truth of your heart, Softly spooning into one another's lives we teach each other the feeling of fidelity, I nurture your neck with my loving mouth speaking warmly along your sensitive ear I've come to harvest the cream of your cravings your open breaths so pretty with honesty we are both at the mercy of our poetry's ecstasy - J.A.B. 2020

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/6/2021 2:22:00 PM

Lovely, sensual write Justin. Linda

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/8/2020 6:01:00 PM

WOW!! Most definitely sexy, passionate and beautiful :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/8/2020 11:55:00 PM

It doesn't get any better than that Akkina!...I thank you...J.A.B.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/7/2020 10:44:00 AM

WoW! Justin, You have a penned a passionate and sensual write. And he knows what he wants and wants to fill her every desire. At least that's my take on your well-written write. I found it to bevery romantic as well.PS, it's nice to you posting. I hope you are well and staying safe. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Justin Bordner
Date: 12/7/2020 11:14:00 AM

There is beauty in your heart Poetess...I'm currently composing my 4th Heroic Crown Sonnet...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/20/2020 7:50:00 PM

"it's not narcissism, it's love's necessity,"...this line of clarity I feel is a reassurance as well as a truth. The love is not driven by selfishness but driven by need, and what is the harm of giving into that need when it gives one joy and euphoria? There is a discovery in every intimate moment I feel that heightens the flame of Love. Those are my thoughts on this lovely poem. Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/21/2020 8:12:00 PM

Very lovely, and wise thoughts Laura...love is most enlightening indeed...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/20/2020 7:48:00 PM

I believe we can entrap ourselves in our own needs, and sometimes through intimacy we transform pain into pleasure. I am not sure why this comes to mind when I read this but your poetry speaks that to me.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/21/2020 7:54:00 PM

As long as there's love in the need then the need is worthy of attention Laura. What could be better than sharing a salvation through a loving suffering...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/24/2020 2:51:00 AM

Defies description... there's a beautiful trust in naked honesty

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/24/2020 12:43:00 PM

Something so tender, so delicate...so very rare to share in this wilderness of strange suffering. I like sharing myself with you Poetess...Justin

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/14/2020 2:21:00 AM

Wow Justin, this is romance at its most sensual best! I love this peek into your romantic realm. xxoo

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/24/2020 12:53:00 PM

Thank you Connie!...to trust another while in the thick of the merciless tempest of Life's lashes is what everyone craves...J.A.B.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/3/2020 1:20:00 PM

Always the romantic one, Justin ... and full of bottomless passion. I find it hard for me to write like this, only ever tiptoeing along the borders of this topic ... rarely - if ever - plunging. "I've come to harvest the cream of your cravings" that's the most poignant line of your musings here, methinks. Very seductive.

Justin Bordner
Date: 5/24/2020 2:27:00 PM

You've got your finger on the pulse Poet. I'm too sensitive for my own good, but it feels too good to change...J.A.B.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/5/2020 9:34:00 PM

Wow.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/7/2020 6:46:00 PM

I love the WoW factor...J.A.B.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/4/2020 9:03:00 PM

Wow, love this, Justin, the words of classic love, you bring forth so well.

Justin Bordner
Date: 3/7/2020 6:49:00 PM

Thanks Poet, I do my best to burn the love fuel of my heart...J.A.B.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/25/2020 6:39:00 AM

"your open breaths so pretty with honesty"what a beautiful line, its like a mouth full of honey for your sweat heart. You never fail to give sensuality new meaning . Have a wonderful day dear poet friend xo

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/25/2020 1:45:00 PM

Honest love is hot love Pixie...I'm so glad this poem's sensuality speaks to you...J.A.B.