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Carbon Monoxide -Co- Week 3: Talkin' 'Bout My 'Noxide

The steady pull of temptation-- a tease on my resolution. When I can sleep, I take what dreams afford me. In these dreams, my 'noxide comes to ward me. Her smoke is an invitation. my conscience falls for the con science of my imagination. I give in and reality spins. Between the sleeps, I lie in sanity. I wonder: Did I give into my humanity? did I'd err? Is that smoke in the air?

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Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/3/2009 8:31:00 PM

Yes you're right ex lovers can be toxic. I like this one

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/29/2009 6:57:00 PM

Those ex lovers can be like toxic poison, great job!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/28/2009 4:14:00 PM

There is smoke in the air. Second hand smoke... And it harms. So, save yourself from more lung damage and keep resisting. If not for yourself, then for those around you. Your writing is quite good.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/25/2009 7:33:00 PM

Great poetry, about a human challenge of the hardest kind!

Sandra Hudson

Date: 6/25/2009 7:11:00 PM

Its takes a man to admit when he is wrong. I felt the wrath of one man for 3 years. I was only 2 inches tall when I left him. It took a lot of Gods intervention to keep me from making a very permanant decision. I am so thankfull you realized it in time. You are very precious in my book.-AA

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/25/2009 12:19:00 AM

Ending it with smoke in the air is Ex'!I Love your Carbon Monoxide Poems=)Well done<33