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Car Kiss

Sunlight crackles in trill of daytime grasses ripple on clay so round my man rushes to sip tea on tray slipping empty car keys zoom a sound he’s office bound before swish he plants… kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/30/2013 10:37:00 PM
Nice "shape" poem of a comm'on morning scene. Welcome to the "souphand hope to see many more from you! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/26/2012 6:54:00 AM
I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Zelene. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2012 2:47:00 PM
Oh Oh very nice piece !
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Date: 6/20/2012 1:42:00 PM
If that wish...sounds like a super dish....for thee I do wish...peace and love...blessing
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