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Below is the poem entitled CAPTURED which was written by poet Nicole Arvizu. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The creamson blue eyes that stare at me 
make me believe am in a fantasy 
they captured and inprisoned me 
know he's all i see
the eyes i see is what i love 
make me a dove 
the love in your eyes
i hope and pray never dies
finally am set free from your spell
but i've already fell
know am under my own spell
its funny you cought me
to my suprise you didn't flee
but stayed by me
i pray to god that this a dream 
if so that's just mean
because i really wanted you to capture me 

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  1. Date: 7/11/2012 12:33:00 PM
    It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Nicole. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the garden of inspiration and continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 5:13:00 AM
    Oh romance is oh what a wonderful thing! (Hope it's not a dream). Lovely, lovely poem Nicole!

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 8:08:00 PM