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Eyes, meet : Auras meld, Hearts entwine Inspired by "SweetHeart" Linda-Marie's Contest "First Love" TOO LATE

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2010 10:55:00 AM

i am here to wish you double luck in the contest, knowing you captured my attention. nice to all your comments. i am trying a new write . maybe not so mischief, until the end. A little bit of my name until BILLY THE KIDSTER , STOPS PRETENDING TO BE ME ..P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 11:47:00 AM

Hi my darling silent beau.. and yes my contest close rather quickly so just keep looking .. I am on my 5th one to date and this "beauty" Epigram definitely would have ranked high on the list... its my kinda "First Love" poem... hope u are feeling better now and wish I could help u type your poems and post them to help out... a definite prize winner .. luv form your forever "Sweetheart"

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/23/2010 9:07:00 PM

All the same thnkas for sharing. I enjoyed it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2010 6:52:00 PM

Good luck in the contest..p.d.

Amy Green

Date: 4/23/2010 6:51:00 PM

I like this one.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/23/2010 6:06:00 PM

too late--they go by fast these days!! lol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2010 5:35:00 PM

Interesting memories of first love..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/23/2010 5:34:00 PM

This sounds really sweet.though i am not surprised you would write something so heart warming, enough to melt anyone's heart. Auras, such a beautiful word. are you portraying the sensation you felt the moment you met Lenore?if so, it's beautiful.so in love, only with few words.it would be on my list.good luck.i love you always spirit brother,& i my wishes are that your health mends.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/23/2010 5:34:00 PM

even so, i also pray that you will be happy again, the day when you entwine with the love that melts your heart. .~sister spirit Lynn Always