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Too long spent in deep shadows prevented my eyes from seeing why the lights were so dimmed why I had the need for freeing Verses written by candle light but not signed with my name with one step out of the shadow my first poem went up in flame No lack of inspiration to fuel a captive poet's sensitive ire he reached for my written words I torched their corners with fire A ray of light through a small crack the dungeon door he didn't close tight stimulus kept me awake and writing penning until darkness of the night Words of anguish and freedom I wrote morning shadows danced on my face he came once more to taunt my soul he who buried me in this tomb-like place. He reached for my writings on the table I stubbornly shook my head, turned away clutching my night's work to my breast I bravely said, "I must see the light of day." Carried from the cavern's earthen ground I looked at him near the edge of the river he reached again for my treasured verses into the rushing water, my writings deliver. Hands covered my face in fear of reprisal his strength brandishes strikes with clout eyes shielded from the sun's blinding rays I waited for him to take his thrashing rout No clobbering fists or slaps given in anger no harsh threats to bring forth my cries no monstrous shadows looming over me freed from my shadow by opening my eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/16/2016 6:22:00 PM
don't close your eyes again...there's so much pain in this write...though incredible, well............................
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:11:00 AM
Thanks, Sage, but alas...I cannot sleep with my eyes open...not that I get much of that anyway.
Date: 2/15/2016 9:22:00 PM
Incredible write Lin. Powerful and sad but with a beautiful ending. Wonderful story of personal strength.
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:11:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, James. Your comments made me smile.
Date: 2/15/2016 12:41:00 PM
Very well done! I am never disappointed when I read your writes! :)
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Date: 2/15/2016 12:58:00 PM
Your comment I take to my heart, Cas. Thank you.
Date: 2/15/2016 11:01:00 AM
MR's word: intense. Creatively intense, powerful and I was drawn in, held by each line. I do love your pen ... CayCay
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Date: 2/15/2016 11:14:00 AM
Those are very kind and welcome comments, CayCay. I'm glad my pen refills itself without prompting from me. ;-)
Date: 2/15/2016 8:19:00 AM
Wonderful poem covered by the light of your spirit and beyond the shadows or madding crowd of postmodernism.Congrat.
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Date: 2/15/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind comments, Ovidiu. I wonder if Thomas Hardy ever felt this way.

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