Captive

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Shrouded Distant pine trees Blanketed in silver Briefly secrets held captive Sun's light

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/28/2015 12:05:00 PM

Super title for this splendid CINQUAIN... vivid imagery and beautiful phrasing, '...blanketed in silver,' '...secrets held captive,' Well done Sara! Best wishes, Keith

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/25/2015 2:17:00 PM

The picture and your words have a gothic feel to them. I like it!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/21/2015 4:46:00 PM

i agree with Jan. Beautifully done, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 5/21/2015 3:52:00 PM

absolutely delightful Sara such wonderful imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx