Captivating

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Heavens cloud I call it

7 syllables by 2 heavens number

followed by 9 syllables cloud

three trinity crossroads

looking into love your eyes there's nowhere left in this world I would rather be at this minute Time stands still Straying into a dream gem bringing joy sighs to the heart held captivated in a moment Whispering Happiness kisses your soul can I be the light inside your dark spaces dancing brightly night One spirit Silver shadows tangoing together holding hands deep footprints remain beautiful with you

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2015 5:27:00 AM

- Deep love in these lines, Liam - It is beautiful !!! - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/12/2015 4:26:00 PM

Hi Liam!This is a most beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I just love it!Another very beautiful,romantic,dreamy, most enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet!Great!Just superb!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just perfect!Excellent!Very delightful imagery!I love your poetry style in all too.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything.Always keeping you in my prayers,Liam.Keep your Faith!Please take good care of yourself always.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^