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Captivated Adoration

Evermore eyes so bright they could pierce starlight, a twinkling wonderment of an infectious smile, the ultimate sentiment upon a captivated heart amidst a tender child's earnest devotion of unyielding adoration

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/25/2016 8:21:00 AM
Aw, that is very sweet, Paloma. I agree w/Lyric Man. You set aside your Warrior Princess armor and gave a truly tender hearted poem straight from the heart. I loved it very, very much. You touched this heart of a child within me. Beautiful sequence of seamless imagery of words. Excellent in all ways. Brilliant depth of thought/simplicity of expression. Much love from RW.
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Date: 10/15/2016 2:39:00 PM
Very true.. Nice piece :-)
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Date: 10/14/2016 9:20:00 AM
This is beautiful Paloma. I could see this wonderful scene play out in my mind as I read. Those big eyes, opened and learning, nothing is more pure.
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Date: 10/14/2016 10:07:00 AM
Kids truly love without an agenda, unless of course it's Christmas. Thanks so much Chris, much appreciate your kind words.

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