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My heart goes out to my wife.Her friend Cindy is fighting the battle of her life. Donna is standing strong with her good friend.
Anyway it’s all been on my heart lately as she’s been staying with Cindy some. So I started writing the other day. At first it seemed like I was writing something to the Lord, which is kinda different for me. Then it seemed like I was writing to Donna. Lol then I couldn’t decide if the personality of the song was to Donna or the Lord. Finally it dawned on me. Which was it? Her? Or Him? The answer? Yes.
It’s raw and unpolished. Kinda had the tune to Colder Weather by Zack Brown in my head as I was writing if you can hear it.
I call it
“Captivated“