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Capital Sin

A Capital Sin There always seems to be some tear jerker About you not being a miracle worker Even after how hard you tried and tried They continually have cried and cried. With great attitude and pleasant disposition How could you ever end up in a precarious position; If they really had been in their right mind Only peace and tranquility would they find. With your pleasant smiles and awesome appearance All of these are needed additional insurance Which are there to welcome us back again To condemn dentist or staff is considered a capital sin. James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran Wrote this after I read a negative comment about my dentist and all of his staff.

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Date: 9/10/2014 9:06:00 AM
I am a nurse and been about to experiences where I was demean and treated unfairly...:( I re echo your sentiments but I just pray people will have greater understanding..
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James Horn
Date: 9/10/2014 9:37:00 AM
How did you find my poem so fast? I just wrote it and this: In life, certain things seem to be missing, Like two young lovers when first kissing; All of the emotion it does instill What we won't to be done is God's will. Now you finish it.
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James Horn
Date: 9/10/2014 9:23:00 AM
My wife is a certified NICU Nurse. Sounds like you have to be subservient to everyone yet still in control. You can never satisfy all of the people all of the time. Now let me check out some of your poems. Jim Horn

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