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Canyon

Canyon widens River nearly dry Are you in love with her?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/20/2016 1:56:00 PM
Wow, I love this. Concise yet powerful and weighted
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Date: 12/11/2012 3:45:00 PM
excellent one! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/11/2012 7:50:00 AM
Thanks Luke, I am glad you participated.
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Date: 12/11/2012 7:36:00 AM
Thank you all very much.
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Date: 12/11/2012 4:30:00 AM
Congrats on your winning spot Luke and good question...xx
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Date: 12/5/2012 2:46:00 PM
Luke.. wow...love this...good luck in the contest..pd
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Date: 12/4/2012 3:30:00 PM
this is really nice how you kept it very like a real haiku even adding on the question. One of the best ones.
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Date: 12/4/2012 1:37:00 PM
Nice one, Luke. - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise ;)
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