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Can'T Seem To Get It Right

The simple things in life Come pretty easy to me Like tying my shoes Or knowing when I should eat I have no problem per se In rolling out of bed Or in the combing of hair That sits on top of my head It's being an adult That has my hands tied No matter how hard I try I just can't seem to get it right I can sit in front of the T.V. Give it my best binge Watch the world collapse around me With remote still in hand I am fairly adept In the realm of color schemes So I rarely need help When it comes to dressing me And never have I forgotten How to ride a bike But being an adult hurts my noggin As I can't seem to get it right I'm a pro at teeth brushing And keep them pearly white And no longer feel the need To use a night light All of this and more I can do Finding it easier than said Oh and before I forget I can even make my bed Walking tall amongst it all With sturdy legs enjoying the ride But apparently this adult thingy's not for me As I can't seem to get it right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/4/2016 2:05:00 PM
I'm with you on this one Mike. It sucks being a grown up. I'd rather sit at the kiddie table and color. Another wonderful write from your golden pen. I enjoyed it:)
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Date: 9/4/2016 12:13:00 PM
Fun as always! Acting adult - not for me. Playing with the grands...loving it, not with high collar or scowls, just good old fashioned games and running around :)
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Date: 9/4/2016 8:55:00 AM
such relatable content. I believe everyone in this world is stuck and suck at adulting . amazing use of rhymes . loved to read it . the simplicity of this poem took me back to the time long gone.
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Mike Hauser
Date: 9/4/2016 12:56:00 PM
No one ever accused me of not being simple!
Date: 9/4/2016 8:23:00 AM
I hear ya Mike, somedays it is down right scary being an adult! Another very cute, humorous down to earth one Mike!:)
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Mike Hauser
Date: 9/4/2016 8:44:00 AM
Good morning beautiful!

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