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Can'T Let You Go

mother you mean the world to me i never want to loose you i love you with all my heart i never want to let you go i don't understand why i do the things i do i can't help but feel bad i don't want to be the child that your soon to lose i don't want to be the one to lose you i can't see how my life would be without you it would nothing but a horror movie but happening in real life i would lose my mind i would lose control i just can't let you go. you understand my every feeling you understand my every thought you love me for me and you love me for who i am you care for me you cherish me i'm just at a young age and i can't help but to try and understand i just want to love you and i want to be the one there for you i put you through so much but you always seem to stand strong mother i love you and i never want to let you go

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Date: 10/26/2010 11:17:00 AM
Hi Istzayana.Nicely expressed thoughts about your mother.She sounds a lovely mum that you love dearly and that i'm sure loves you with that special gift that mum's like her possess,unconditional love.Thank you for sharing these words.Very touching to read. Luv June(sylvia)
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Itszayana. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:01:00 AM
Sweet mom poem!! Enjoyed reading today.
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:47:00 AM
Glad you have such a good mother!
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