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Canny of Unspoken Request

You left in boldness, your ears flicker unnoticed Aren’t you a canny one…? I said “Oh…”, and you said “No!” How thwart art thou? Remember the Gate? How he spoke the words… In context, He was a parable about love He said “For God so…”, and some said “Woe!” If I said “Oh”, and you say “No” If I said “it was too quick for you to say…” And if I said “I can show you another way…” But you say, “You’re too canny, per se…”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/11/2009 12:23:00 PM
Hello Davin and welcome to PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:26:00 AM
Thank you Carol! Cheers!
Date: 8/11/2009 12:18:00 PM
different too.... loved the inner rym, enjoy your day.
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:25:00 AM
Thank you Derrick. :)
Date: 8/11/2009 11:06:00 AM
I like the idea of a poem with dialog, it's very good. I really enjoy it.
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:25:00 AM
Thanks Chris.
Date: 8/11/2009 4:42:00 AM
Interesting writing different. Sara
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:25:00 AM
Thank you Sara :)

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