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Canny of Unspoken Request

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Canny of Unspoken Request

You left in boldness, your ears flicker unnoticed
Aren’t you a canny one…?
I said “Oh…”, and you said “No!”
How thwart art thou?
Remember the Gate? How he spoke the words…
In context, He was a parable about love
He said “For God so…”, and some said “Woe!”
If I said “Oh”, and you say “No”
If I said “it was too quick for you to say…”
And if I said “I can show you another way…”
But you say, “You’re too canny, per se…”

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  1. Date: 8/11/2009 12:23:00 PM
    Hello Davin and welcome to PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in your writing. Love, Carol

    Math Avatar Davin Math
    Date: 11/24/2011 12:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol! Cheers!
  1. Date: 8/11/2009 12:18:00 PM
    different too.... loved the inner rym, enjoy your day.

    Math Avatar Davin Math
    Date: 11/24/2011 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Derrick. :)
  1. Date: 8/11/2009 11:06:00 AM
    I like the idea of a poem with dialog, it's very good. I really enjoy it.

    Math Avatar Davin Math
    Date: 11/24/2011 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Chris.
  1. Date: 8/11/2009 4:42:00 AM
    Interesting writing different. Sara

    Math Avatar Davin Math
    Date: 11/24/2011 12:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara :)