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dimensions align need to apply the hand brake way out of order populace without borders … used the virtue of vision. © Harry J Horsman 2016

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Date: 7/11/2017 9:24:00 AM
If we only had such insight. Nice words, and thanks for the visit.
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Date: 9/26/2016 8:18:00 PM
Nicely penned truths
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Date: 8/2/2016 7:11:00 PM
Indeed, Harry, where on earth are we going? Fine write, enjoyed. Regards, Viv
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Date: 8/2/2016 3:02:00 PM
Lack of vision has contributed to present age world problems; perhaps it would be wise to start afresh!! // paul
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Date: 8/2/2016 4:00:00 AM
A wise look at our present world with all its warts! Good tanka Harry! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/1/2016 3:51:00 AM
Excellent write and deep tanka. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/31/2016 7:55:00 PM
Yes sir, this old world has really gotten into a hurry. I agree, time to apply the brakes. If only the people we elect and pay, had your vision! Great write Harry!
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Date: 7/31/2016 6:17:00 PM
fine concept and finer the creative execution of this piece, harry!.. spill ink and huggs
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Date: 7/31/2016 5:34:00 PM
GREAT title for a world out of order, harry. What is the answer??? (loved your visit today)
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Date: 7/31/2016 12:51:00 PM
- Yes, really true Harry ..... "need to apply the handbrake" .... NOW !!! - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2016 12:05:00 PM
Nice little write Harry.
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Date: 7/31/2016 10:36:00 AM
Wonderful verse lot of impact in this poem. This whole world is out of order. Thank you for reading my poem. Hugs Eve
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