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Candy Horse Vs Dark Kid

The center of a star reflects just like a diamond... Returning a pearl within each silver breath that one treasures... With faceted panels, I promised I'd never... Sweep over a deep sea of blue waves unmeasured... There is a pattern woven inside golden petals that kiss the inside of my heart... Parts of my heart that I've thus' failed to start... With soft fingers dancing, you're forever entrancing... My star that's eternally far... A co write written by Liam and Christian

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Anna Hopper

Date: 3/23/2015 8:29:00 AM

I ADORE this! Once again, your choice of words is beautiful! 7 for sure!

Karl Mcdonnell

Date: 2/17/2015 9:03:00 PM

Liked this Liam,thanks

Alesia Leach

Date: 2/14/2015 4:05:00 PM

Stunning collaboration with beautifully painted emotions. ;0)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 2/9/2015 7:20:00 AM

A wonderful collaboration! So many amazing images and emotions here.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/7/2015 10:28:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely imagery poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/7/2015 8:52:00 AM

You have both done a masterful job!

Tim Smith

Date: 2/7/2015 6:05:00 AM

A beautiful collab....Tim

Joseph May

Date: 2/6/2015 10:23:00 PM

Very good cowrite Liam....awesome last line...best wishes

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/6/2015 7:54:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Christian! Very beautiful pen you've penned here my dearest friend. Fantastic imagery and collaboration! Truly amazing! A very huge 7 +++ from me to you! Your pen is truly glowing golden!Have a very wonderful weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^

Jan Allison

Date: 2/6/2015 3:54:00 PM

A stunning collaboration - such wonderful imagery - congrats to both of you:-) Hugs Jan a 7 from me:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2015 2:52:00 PM

- A charming and beautiful poem Liam and Christian - (Who is Christian? :) - Hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2015 2:39:00 PM

That far away star is intriguing ..Enjoyed reading your work... Thanks for stopping by. Sara