Candy

Cloud layers thin-spun from crystallized sugar and colored tints of rainbow- carnivals hawk the sweet children love to eat in crepey layers pressed to crunchy end, candy treat. Copyright, August 22, 2016 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2016 12:53:00 PM

Coloured candy is lovely to look at, Faye, and most children love it! Your poem is quite tempting, too! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/26/2016 8:42:00 AM

Hi Faye. Congrats for your placement, with this fine piece!! ;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2016 4:00:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Faye :) - hugs and :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/26/2016 3:12:00 AM

Crepey layers pressed to crunchy end treats. That is good stuff. Congratulations. Kai

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/26/2016 12:31:00 AM

Yum! Well done, Faye! Viv x

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2016 9:37:00 PM

Congratulations Faye with this delicious delightful Pleiades! 7 ; )

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/25/2016 8:18:00 PM

Faye, congrats on your 3rd place win with this creatively delicious write! Blessings!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2016 5:00:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Faye - i see we are next to eachother on the list - such sweet treats:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2016 5:24:00 AM

I'm not a candy floss fan but this is lovely and descriptive Faye - I've written mine about chocolate but am yet to post it :-)Good luck in the contest hugs Jan xx