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Candra and Idunn

There he stands across from her, With the invisible wall between them, Knowing that chance to be together would be the cost of deat,. So they stand apart from one another in two different dimensions, That neither can reach, Never will he touch her Beautiful face, That shines like the moon in the swallowing darkness, Never will there lips touch that he has kissed many lifetimes before, Never will she feel the warmth of his love, Which once sustained the lonely coldness of her empty heart, Never will their bodies touch with the fiery passion they longed for, These desire have been has denied in this lifetime, And powerless to change their own destiny, They stand apart whispering the word of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/19/2010 11:31:00 PM
A write that weights in gold. A smile given upon my face yet it's a sad write. I'm smiling at your talent and I am still amazed after reading it for the second time. Wow.. Love, Sami.
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:05:00 AM
Beautiful touching words sketching a very lovely, sweet but sad picture. Beautiful write my friend. Love and best wishes......Ravindra.......Jamecia Buggs.
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Date: 8/18/2010 8:17:00 AM
What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Jamecia. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2010 2:53:00 PM
Interesting passionate write...Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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