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Candles On the Beach

Wild Rocks,Tamed Waves, Covered with blanket of Stars Hugs in the Moonlight. Charma

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Skat A

Date: 3/18/2010 9:36:00 PM

a very beautiful poem. Enjoyed the read...

The Fringe

Date: 3/9/2010 6:26:00 PM

Very vivid imagry in this one. Quite a picture you created with so few words. David B

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/7/2010 6:13:00 PM

lights and moon, sounds good

James Fraser

Date: 3/7/2010 8:27:00 AM

Nothing beats hugs in the moonlight, so romantic Charmaine >> James

Sammy Shaq

Date: 3/7/2010 8:19:00 AM

Romance, to be indulged into such compassionate imagery hungers the heart's urge to simply jump out and grab somebody! Wonderful write. Love, Sami.

John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 3/6/2010 11:50:00 PM

Your writes as always Charma amaze me just how good they truley are your a hell of a writter my friend keep knocking them outta the park great romantic write

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/6/2010 10:32:00 PM

such a lovely scene and thank you for your comment and birthday wishes!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2010 8:28:00 PM

Another romantic and lovely scene u set dear friend Charma.. so inviting.. I can see the vision so perfectly.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2010 8:14:00 PM

Sounds as sweet to me as those chocolates you mentioned for an easter basket!!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/6/2010 7:17:00 PM

Your poem is beautiful. A blanket of stars is a nice warm and seductive cover. Thanks for your comment.

Margaret Foster

Date: 3/6/2010 7:05:00 PM

A romantic evening on the beach perhaps? good one Charma.....cheers Margaret

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/6/2010 5:15:00 PM

ahhhhhh bliss! Light & Love little one!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 3/6/2010 4:44:00 PM

So few words with so much meaning. Wow I have a lot to learn. thank for sharing

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2010 4:29:00 PM

Very romantic write in this Senryu.. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara