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Candles

Candles flicker gently until moonlight appears, then move into rapid laughter higher

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/20/2021 12:33:00 PM
You have a cute and witty imagination, Angela. Next time I'll try to light up the moon with a candle :) Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/22/2021 8:04:00 AM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 7/6/2008 3:48:00 PM
this poem offers the reader a clear visual - wonderful job - congrats on the feature
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Date: 6/15/2008 2:30:00 PM
Hello~Astrid congrats! on your featured poem.Candles are definitely a mood setter.Laugh on...B BLESS Crystal
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Date: 6/13/2008 4:33:00 PM
Astrid, congrats, this is witty, light-hearted and fun, take care D-nyce
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Date: 6/10/2008 5:12:00 PM
My dear friend, congragulations on being featured with this lovely piece. Love, Sara:)
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Date: 6/10/2008 2:54:00 PM
Astrid How lovely congratulations on your featured poem this week! Laura
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Date: 6/10/2008 2:47:00 PM
Wonderful use of this form, Astrid. The end line totally took me by surprise!! This is surely a well-deserved selection as a favorite of the week here at the Soup! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/10/2008 1:43:00 PM
Nice use of this short format. I enjoyed it. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/10/2008 12:29:00 PM
Hello Astrid, Here's to the laughter! Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 6/10/2008 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations Ivy, on your cinquain "Candles" being featured. Vince
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