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Candlelight Flames Pt 1

Candlelight Flames pt. 1 Strip me with your golden stare Your golden eyes Your golden hair Strip me naked in the rain Dancing and Dancing ~ So beautiful you stand Dancing and Dancing ~ Your love in my hand Dancing and Dancing ~ Our love in the sand This night last forever Its never the same Our last dance together As you burn ~ my Candlelight Flames Your eyes held closed so tight I'll swim in your OCEAN As you scream for me in God's name Your love all scraped down my back As you scream for me in God's name up you and in you and up you and in you I choke you Over and Over and Over and Over ~ I choke you all Over So helpless you stand Your life in my hand as I push you Over ~Your Crying Despair Now it all just falls apart Your arms around me Just fall apart So just Dance this Last Dance as you choke in the sand It all falls apart scraping God's name all down my back Dancing this Dance as you burn~ my Candlelight Flames Contest-- Simply Beautiful #2 by Kelly Deschler 4-19-2015 2nd Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 12:07:00 AM

Christian, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~

Christian Alexander
Date: 7/27/2015 5:12:00 AM

you're so RAD Linda, thank you. And Thank you for posting a comment back in 2012 when I posted this, when I was still shy and insecure about sharing my emotions with anyone,, let alone The Entire World

Jan Allison

Date: 4/20/2015 11:46:00 AM

Great descriptive write very powerful imagery congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Christian Alexander
Date: 7/27/2015 5:04:00 AM

Thank you Jan. I appreciate your compliment as well as your passion for the art.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/19/2015 7:05:00 PM

A very passionate and powerful write, Christian. Great expressive work! Congrats on the win!

Christian Alexander
Date: 7/27/2015 5:07:00 AM

Hi Kelly. Thank you so much for the accolades.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2015 5:01:00 PM

Christian:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2012 9:32:00 PM

CHRISTIAN, romantic and deep, thank you for sharing your wonderful verse* good night :-) Linda aka~ PD

Christian Alexander
Date: 9/7/2014 4:10:00 AM

Thank you Poet Destroyer A for your words of encouragement~