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Candleburn

my candle was lit right after birth burning aflame along with my name dancing lights swaying left to right do good it shines bright flickers when I lose sight intensely it burns when events took a turn life blows are threats to extinguish my breath as it grows shorter in my daily struggles lessons are learnt as my candle burnt to put out the glow is not for me to know it might be any time now or maybe tomorrow though there’s still spark I can see in the dark one day it will lose flare as I gasp my last air while it smolders its glimmer I must offer to help guide the way of those who are astray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/19/2016 12:16:00 AM
well written, Meadow. SKAT
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Meadow Morada
Date: 3/21/2016 12:56:00 PM
thanks
Date: 3/18/2016 2:38:00 AM
Hi, Medow... thanks for the reply. Linda
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Date: 3/16/2016 8:53:00 PM
Deeply written and expressed Meadow, the struggles real... LINDA
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Meadow Morada
Date: 3/17/2016 8:40:00 PM
thanks for reading...i truly appreciate it

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