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Candle of the Heart

when fragile candles caress tawny skin, you watch the honeyed flame shimmer air. This morphs in shade by tinted cream like jaundiced moths that kiss magenta lips From 4 SHALLOW LOVE IS LIKE A REVERIE Verses of metaphors3 by Lu Loo 30/4/2019

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Date: 5/25/2019 7:01:00 PM
Very lovely Brian. Congratulations on your second placement! : )
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Date: 5/24/2019 2:16:00 PM
Beautiful verse, congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve
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Brian Duffield
Date: 5/24/2019 2:36:00 PM
Truly appreciate your comments
Date: 5/7/2019 1:17:00 PM
Hello Brian Duffield, I find this poem very romantic. I njoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.
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