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Candle Maker

Candle maker Iva Bentwick's business couldn't take a trick, So he changed his name to one not so lame, Now business is pretty slick. alternate last line: Now many candles are being lit.

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Date: 4/28/2015 1:02:00 PM
LOL! Of course, with Bentwick for a candle business logo, who would buy? hahahaa So what's the new name now? I won't guess...lol!
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John Williams
Date: 4/29/2015 8:06:00 AM
Hello Kim, His new name is Iva Straitun. No wonder business is going well. Hugs from John
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John Williams
Date: 4/28/2015 4:46:00 PM
Hello Kim,,,,I guess a bent wick is no good to anyone, especially a candle maker. I haven't thought of his new name yet, leave it with me and I will get back to you. Thanks for your comment.....John

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