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Canalopes

we just ate i didn't like it most of it was in the carry out box. well, are we hungry again i said after about 15 miniutes of riding? he did the side squint and his lips snuck the slightest upturn whatta ya mean we just ate in the most expensive place in town. i can't help it i said with a little push in my voice plus sort of a whine o.k., he wheeled into a grocery store, got out and brought me a canalope. now that is a real man! janetta

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Date: 6/16/2016 11:22:00 AM
Amazing write... JH...skat
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Date: 5/26/2009 9:00:00 PM
Janetta, I'm smiling here. And you're right. That is a real man. No complaints, just loving. I hope you enjoyed that cantelope. I feel sure that you did. Always, Dane
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Date: 3/30/2009 4:28:00 PM
~lol~ Too cute! Hey, sometimes it's the little things that mean the most! And the thoughtful things. Love, Shar
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