Canadian Geese

. Canadian Geese Delightful sound Husband's glasses squeeze nose

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/30/2011 6:58:00 AM

Great Haiku, Sara, so cute! Enjoyed the read and thank you for your kind comments always!...Gert

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/29/2011 10:11:00 AM

So cute!!! Love it!!! Very creative !!! XOXO Christine

Daver Austin

Date: 1/29/2011 8:02:00 AM

This is super. Hope your husband didn't read thisw. Love, Dave

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2011 2:47:00 PM

We have too many of them where I am. They cross the streets in bunches and hold up the traffic. Your haiku displays good descriptiveness about those so-called "rats with wings".

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 1/28/2011 11:07:00 AM

i think it's humorous, nice haiku.Are you a Canadian?

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/28/2011 2:58:00 AM

hehe, this had me smiling Sara ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 9:01:00 PM

hahaha. He sounds like a goose??

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/27/2011 6:46:00 PM

Nice image you have sketched of the canadian geese, sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2011 5:03:00 PM

Super sweet write Sara... luv your last line my friend.. could hear the sound the geese make with your words my friend.. good luck if for the contest...luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2011 3:35:00 PM

I thought that I heard some geese and was wondering how when its too late for them to be going south and too early for the northern trip..Got to looking around and it was my husband breathing with his glasses too far down on his nose..Sara