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A father tends to his children's fears with sweet kisses while drying their tears. And his hug embraces them with love, prizing each as a gift from above. Can you tell me of a father's kiss? A lover acknowledges your past pain, supporting you as you smile again. And desire brews an erotic scent as sweat drops and sexy thoughts ferment. Can you tell me of a love like this? A child reaps the innocence of youth, a magical time of trust and truth. And laughter's heard almost every day, resounding in the echoes of play. Can you tell me of such childhood bliss? A man sees God in a starry sky, and he's no longer afraid to die. Faith doesn't require anything more than he believes; to make his soul soar. Can you tell me of truths I dismiss? (Rhyme) 6/3/2016

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Date: 5/14/2018 9:52:00 PM
Love the format with your questions distinctly set apart, Emile. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/15/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Line, you're a good friend and loyal supporter my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/6/2016 12:11:00 AM
Emile this is , well , I am at a loss for words! You are a master poet! :)
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Date: 6/6/2016 7:19:00 AM
Thank you my friend, your words warm my heart. Emile.
Date: 6/4/2016 9:28:00 PM
What a triumph of writing! Oh Emil you've outdone yourself! Magnifique! in every way! Enjoyed immensely A7
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Date: 6/5/2016 8:14:00 AM
Thank you so much John, you honor me sir. Emile.
Date: 6/3/2016 8:36:00 PM
Both intellectually and emotionally appealing poem...Like it very much....
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/4/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Probir, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

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