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- Can You Still See It -

When I was a little girl I enjoyed studying the clouds The clouds turned into all sorts of shapes Yes, it was a great fairytale high up in the blue sky Beautiful castle with princesses who were playing in their garden. I could see different animals as small cute cats dangerous fire-breathing dragons The sky could be an exciting world I had almost forgotten this world Today there are many clouds .... I have to go and see ... Is it still here My fairytale sky I see the clouds, yes I do many clouds ........... Yes now I see, you're still here my imagination I see a big bear sitting on a lace pillow lift one arm and waving to me. Hello .... yes I can see you I wave back 25. August 2012 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Cassie Smith

Date: 11/11/2012 6:56:00 AM

I like your poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2012 8:50:00 AM

Cassie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Anne P. Murray

Date: 11/2/2012 11:55:00 AM

Ah...I remembering doing the same thing when I was a small child

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2012 12:23:00 PM

Anne, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Polly Plafcan

Date: 10/15/2012 1:16:00 PM

Ann Lise, Such a lovely write. Enjoyed reading it so very much. It also put me in another world. lol warmest regards, Polly

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/15/2012 1:21:00 PM

Polly, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Ann Roske

Date: 9/13/2012 2:46:00 PM

Enjoyed this write very much Anne Lise- the silver lining of a cloudy day.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2012 1:15:00 AM

Ann, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Mason

Date: 9/8/2012 3:26:00 PM

thank you for this lovely poem. I love clouds. I can stare at them all day with their different shapes and forms. Warm thoughts, Ralph

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2012 3:37:00 PM

Ralph, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2012 7:47:00 AM

A belated thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Anne Lise. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2012 11:03:00 AM

Carol, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/6/2012 10:03:00 AM

Loving this gem...A delightful treasure! Cynthia If I have commented on this verse before, I am probably just having "another" senior moment.LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2012 10:05:00 AM

Cynthia - - - always welcome - - - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/3/2012 8:10:00 AM

Beautiful versing...I too love clouds! Cynthia

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/3/2012 9:05:00 AM

Cynthia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2012 11:39:00 AM

this is very impressive work on what you remember best from your childhood. And how you ended it with the bear saying "I can see you." So wonderful!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2012 11:45:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Cindy Cayton

Date: 8/30/2012 5:47:00 PM

Jus t as lovely as the writer... I appreciate your poetry and you so very much. Much Love, Cindy

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/31/2012 1:49:00 AM

Cindy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/30/2012 12:41:00 PM

You should write a children short story..such talent! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2012 12:50:00 PM

Hmmmmm......Maybe - maybe not - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/29/2012 3:29:00 PM

I still love to watch the clouds float by in the summertime but in winter it is to darn cold. I am heading back home tomorrow so will see if I can charm my husband under the harvest moon. ha ha love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/30/2012 2:26:00 AM

Phyllis, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/29/2012 10:00:00 AM

So did i, only i was a little boy, maybe they were the same ones, the wind is mainly westerly, from Yorkshire to norway with love. love this Anne Lise, you took me on a fantansy ride,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2012 10:18:00 AM

Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2012 7:14:00 AM

beautifully woven poetry Anne-Lise .. imagination rules creativity here luv .. makes me think back to my own childhood days of fun .. so enjoyed ..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2012 7:30:00 AM

Linda-Marie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 8/28/2012 10:47:00 AM

I also still look to the clouds...To see what I can see... :o) Something that helps pass the time when your riding in a car..lol. Very nice... f.e.f. oxox

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2012 11:12:00 AM

Dan, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - I have to see on the road when I drive car. - oxox love always f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/27/2012 2:07:00 PM

reminds me of the grass blanket days....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2012 3:21:00 AM

Doris, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 8/27/2012 9:06:00 AM

Hi, Anne-Lise! I enjoyed reading your narrative poem. It gives an awesome view of the clouds and I love clouds. When I was a child I play on the smoke as if im flying on the clouds. thank you so much for sharing my dear friend. love and hugs, leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2012 9:31:00 AM

Thank you Leonora for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Cory Long

Date: 8/27/2012 5:48:00 AM

I love laying on my back and playing the cloud game.. Guessing shapes.. Now I do it with my daughters some things never die..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2012 5:57:00 AM

Good .... it never die . - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Cory. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/27/2012 5:16:00 AM

I still do that to this day. I've got too much child in me still. Nice poem, Anne. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2012 5:56:00 AM

also have the "child" in me - everyone should have it. Thanks for the visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/26/2012 4:30:00 PM

I did that when I was little!! You can see all kinds of shapes. One time I even saw a shape of a King with a crown and all. It brings back memories. It is kind of funny that we don't do that any more until you mention it lol. Now I have to do that again :)) Awesome, Anne-Lise. Have a great week. Love ya, Toquyen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/27/2012 3:15:00 AM

Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/26/2012 11:34:00 AM

I remember seeing shapes in the clouds. It has been a long time, Thank you for bringing back such great childhood memories.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2012 11:36:00 AM

Joann, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/26/2012 10:02:00 AM

Willam Blake saw angels in the clouds. It is enjoyable to look at the clouds above and see images in them. Sweet work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/26/2012 10:11:00 AM

Matthew, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)