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Can You Hear Me

Can You Hear Me? Balveen, Can you hear me? Keep your pillow dry There is a special angel Hovering around you To protect you Starved heart? To help you be kinder To those unfortunate Enrich them with the Richness of love Confused? You will fuddle and fumble Each step to chisel you Into what you will Become one day Who am I? You will meet me Many decades later Unearthing today's Valuable treasures SECOND Balveen Cheema November 5, 2015 Contest: What Would You Say? Sponsor: Alexis Y.

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Date: 11/8/2015 10:21:00 PM
Superb win balveen with this awesome write... big congrats!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2015 10:32:00 PM
Thanks Upma for always being there!
Date: 11/8/2015 9:19:00 AM
Love the way you wrote this. Introspective questions to yourself, nice.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2015 10:59:00 AM
Thanks James! Such a nice compliment!
Date: 11/7/2015 7:27:00 PM
Balaveen, it was some good adivice in this write. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Thanks for participating in my contest:-) Alexis
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Alexis Y.
Date: 11/8/2015 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Balveen, I don't hosting another anytime. Thanks for participating. If wish you can stop by my blog:')Alexus
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2015 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Alexis! You made me introspect! You, too, did well with your first competition!
Date: 11/7/2015 6:45:00 PM
Congratulations. Great advice.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2015 11:10:00 AM
Many thanks Nayda!
Date: 11/7/2015 4:23:00 PM
Balveen, nice win. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/8/2015 11:11:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 11/4/2015 8:12:00 PM
Amazing words of wisdom that you would tell your younger self, Balveen. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/5/2015 5:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Sandra! Love, Balveen

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