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Can You Dig It

desire is two minds overly eager to combine erasing what's been lined distorting yours and mine passion is two souls feeding on one another two vital wholes halving one another truth is two spirits embraced by harmony each part perfectly fits although there are many love is two hearts sharing a rhythm one stops, the other starts with a perfect hymn

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Date: 11/22/2016 11:09:00 AM
Very well written, Christy. ..and yes, I can dig it:)
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Date: 11/22/2016 7:21:00 AM
"One stops, the other starts" That line right there says it all. Your poem is beautiful Christy and it speaks loudly of love and desire between two who were meant to be. Nicely done.
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Date: 11/22/2016 6:49:00 AM
I can appreciate how much work went into this poem. Its invitation to go dig up the deeper meaning is well worth it. Its quite a gem
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Date: 11/22/2016 5:40:00 AM
Well done, Christy! I enjoyed this.
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