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Can watch Can't touch It's a bubble of trouble Turns my into oscar the grouch Unstoppable drama Could lead to brain trauma Can't let that be I'll just keep my ora clean Do my best Keep my head afloat No control Let the trouble flow Listen to the occasional bicker Feel my radar flicker When it's getting to hot I make sure to step back a notch Keep my space Been to long This situation Should come with a warning Or a date or expiration I know you know It's been said You know how I feel This is no natural disaster A controlled situation Blown up ten times faster I refuse to support A abusive mission, You should abort I stay miles apart I'm a phone call away Hoping you'll top off Give yourself relief Oh, one day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/21/2013 9:08:00 PM
Some situations are harder to control than others. What is so simple for some people is so, SOOOOO, complicated for others. I like your work again. I guess because it all seems to be so personalized with your rhyme, near rhyme, a cleverness is there. Nice work again Sharon.
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Wayland Bunch
Date: 3/21/2013 9:09:00 PM
In the first paragrah, maybe one typo my instead of me. I'm not sure, though, if it isn't please ignore this remark lol.
Date: 3/17/2013 4:07:00 AM
Very well written with subtle references on how to stay out of trouble...... Nice poem.... I enjoyed it.....Jake
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