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Can Somebody Save Me

Of everything I gave up Still feel like it’s not enough Of everything I gave up I’m left with no one to trust Of everything I gave up I feel like everything is burning to dust Can somebody save me? I’m living in a bubble Can somebody save me? Is it worth all this trouble? Can somebody save me? Make this strain go away Suffering through it, day after day Can somebody save me? On my knees, to the Lord I pray When I begin, I don’t even know what to say When I pray, “Dear Lord,” I say “Please can you make this pain ago away? This stress is ridiculous, it’s pointless And I’m sick of it. For everything I stand for, been put through the ringer But in return, all I got was the finger And this pain won’t go away, it’ll just stay and linger Oh please Lord, I can’t be that much of a sinner.” Can somebody save me? “but oh Lord, can’t you just end this game? But you won’t, everything just stays the same God, I’m on the brink of going insane And it’s all because you wont take away my pain” Of everything I gave up Still feel like it’s not enough Of everything I gave up I’m left with no one to trust Of everything I gave up I feel like everything is burning to dust Can somebody save me? “Lord please save me, I’m hanging by a thread My biggest enemy is my mind, as I’m slipping off the edge As the problems grow bigger, the bigger the wedge Dear Lord, did you hear what I just said? No, you never answer, so now its time for bed” Can somebody save me? No… Amen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/7/2011 6:14:00 AM
so nice of a cry,,a humble and meek prayer,,,a very beautiful poem of a love to be saved,,,and it is so original,,and you need only trust,,and believe,,,as i have cried and prayed for the same...thanks for sharing.....
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Date: 8/2/2011 12:32:00 PM
a wonderful poetic prayer. great write.
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Date: 7/19/2011 10:46:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Brianna.
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