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Can I Sing a Lullaby

Escaped, I thought I had, but I was wrong Ran, yes I did, thought I’d hid.. went along Can I sing a lullaby? Home was farce, felt life there TOO harsh Oh, Mama don’t call me no trash Hush little babe hush-a-bye Can I sing a lullaby? Man was he good that smooth talkin’ stud Carmel candy apple brown love hit like a thud Now, just look at me, says it ain’t his blood. Can’t sing no damn lullaby Can’t have it, damn, I won’t try! Lord, oh Lord, will he have his blue eyes Can I sing a lullaby? Time to decide now, NO Mama ain’t here Can I sing, can I try? Thought I’d escaped, but got con’d, now stoned But, I can do yah better little one on my own Walk right out a here There’s a cradle in the sky Walk right on out Baby, I sing ya, I’ll try. I’ll do ya better than my Mama did me Let ya live little one, LIVE and be my baby. * This form is called Blues Poetry

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Date: 12/16/2011 9:17:00 AM
Congratulation my friend on your win and wish you and all yours 'a Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Chris' contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations well written x
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Date: 5/27/2011 5:13:00 AM
this is awesome I have enjoyed it. cory
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:12:00 AM
wow, the is heart-wrenching. as I watch my daughter grow I see her struggles with peer-pressure, and I just want to keep her in a cacoon, away from all the sex, drugs, and violence. wonderful pen.
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:42:00 AM
Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding isn't it?. I am so happy I was able to read your outstanding poetry today Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 9:39:00 PM
Wow .. your footnote is an eye opener .. why not give them out a birth..this is so bad for the youth of any country Debbie.. your poem is very emphatic and luv the refrain of the lullaby .. I fear the end of this life as we know it is near ... just look at the headlines and now this too..oh..
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:26:00 PM
Good information about the subject...Sara
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:17:00 PM
WOWWWW! You nailed it with this one, Deb. You put your unique style into play here and came up with the best one I've seen for the contest. Condoms for 12-year-old boys? Good grief! I was virginity's mascot. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2011 4:02:00 PM
I love this form, Deb. Rhythmic and melodic--driving harder content. Enjoyed very much. ~Soulfire~
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:44:00 PM
The form is called Blues Poetry
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Date: 5/17/2011 3:33:00 PM
Excellence in Poetry...Thank You...
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