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Can I Be a Wandering Cloud

Can i be a wandering cloud....fate of which uncertainties enshroud....wander over the mountains forlorn....or saunter over the fields of corn......can i be a wandering cloud ? I will see the rising sun....will glee when lightening trains its gun....will bring smile on someone's face will wipe out tears with rainy embrace....can i be a wandering cloud ? Seeing me thunder ......children will wonder if i am a lion's den....farmers will surrender to the creator's pen.... i may cringe to the whim of squall....or i may sing a hymn to the Fall...can i be a wandering cloud ? I will not see any border...will not listen to any order....sensing me the peacocks dance and tadpoles prance....i will touch the kites that fly....i will brunch with the birds that sky....can i be a wandering cloud ?

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Skat A

Date: 10/27/2016 5:18:00 PM

Yash, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Patricia Lawton

Date: 10/19/2016 10:23:00 AM

Hello Yash. Love your poem. I wish I could float away as a wondering cloud some day. very warm welcome hon. xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/19/2016 1:09:00 AM

Yes you can, Yash, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@