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Camp Fire Time

Two day tropical winter camping trip. Secluded serene scene. Gentle breeze brushes skin. Take deep breath. Country air is sweet. Bird serenade warms the heart. We sit and sigh, loving the natural high. Venture out for a walk. See muddy wallows. Feral hogs are about. Death’s scent invades the nose. Flies buzz and maggots feast on hog’s carcass. Nature cleaning up. Back at camp we sit, contemplate. Suddenly, we’re boom-boxed by boisterous bass beats as city jungle on wheels cruise by. Why can’t they appreciate and not defecate on tranquility? Nightfall comes. Campfire time. Up high, heaven sprinkles starlight. We get lost in the feeling of being free. winter rain falls hard all night long ~tent spring leaks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/21/2015 9:49:00 AM
"city jungle on wheels...", love it. And your last line, has happened to me at least twice, ending two fine tents. Great work, thanks for bringing it to my contest.
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Al Beech
Date: 8/24/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thank you for the positive feedback. I appreciate it very much.
Date: 8/21/2015 1:50:00 AM
Congrats on wonderful win Al beech with this amazing haibun!
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Al Beech
Date: 8/24/2015 8:33:00 PM
I appreciate your review very much.
Date: 8/20/2015 6:35:00 PM
Al Beech, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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Al Beech
Date: 8/24/2015 8:33:00 PM
Thank you kindly.
Date: 8/20/2015 1:53:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Al Beech
Date: 8/24/2015 8:34:00 PM
Thank you very much
Date: 8/20/2015 11:56:00 AM
Such vivid imagery Al congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Al Beech
Date: 8/24/2015 8:34:00 PM
My wife and I were camping and this was a real experience. Thanks.
Date: 8/10/2015 6:58:00 PM
AL, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*
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Al Beech
Date: 8/11/2015 11:19:00 PM
feedback :)
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Al Beech
Date: 8/11/2015 11:18:00 PM
Thank you for positive feedbak.

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