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Calls After Dark

Nine o’clock dark Stage for shark swim Deep arc stakeout Sailors phishing Not squaring news Sparing no one Once debutante Vessel vaunt sinks For daunt of men Dawns a new day Silent gray-blue Sea fray absconds

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Date: 1/18/2017 11:32:00 PM
Nice to know about this amazing form and the poem is interesting as well.
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Date: 1/17/2017 6:08:00 AM
I had not read this form before and you did a fantastic job with it. The rhymes come in abstract snippets per line, which were fun to read and feel. Nice theme too Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 1/17/2017 5:32:00 AM
A difficult form. Excellent version. Thanks, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, Maurice!
Date: 1/16/2017 11:45:00 PM
This is a beauty, Kim:) the form is very tough, you've used it so well:) a 7:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2017 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 1/16/2017 10:12:00 PM
An excellent poem, Kim!
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White Wolf
Date: 1/16/2017 11:32:00 PM
I know what you meant and that's the main thing. I'm unschooled so I know how difficult the language is. Haha
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2017 10:19:00 PM
Tried...lol...tired :0
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2017 10:18:00 PM
Thank you, WW! Tryed out a new form.

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