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Through the darkest of dark forests Where the spiring snake-like sprouts Fasten you, And piercing the spooky blackness That pervades all of your space, Shoots the sound Of a gushing stream, The ethereal smell Of a fire, The intangible ashes, The wet earth, The rains, And life, Carried over to you. Breaking away from The binding shoots That stake you, Crossing the barrier Of tapering stems, That pain you, If you dare to look at The tiny source of light, The small fire, the water, At the very end of Your eternally dark forest, Where the blue sky Extends to infinity, On the other side Of that stream of life, I would be standing. Always.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/22/2012 1:44:00 PM
it was nice stopping by to read your poem today...hope you enjoy it here at poetry soup..keep the good work up....
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Prakriti Palchoudhury
Date: 4/22/2012 2:27:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 4/20/2012 7:51:00 AM
nice work
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Prakriti Palchoudhury
Date: 4/21/2012 8:08:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 4/19/2012 12:14:00 PM
Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry Prakriti. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. I am so sorry I misspelled your name earlier. Looking forward to reading more poetry from you. Love, Carol
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Prakriti Palchoudhury
Date: 4/20/2012 7:17:00 AM
:)
Date: 4/19/2012 8:34:00 AM
This is beautiful. there is always hope. :)
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Prakriti Palchoudhury
Date: 4/20/2012 7:17:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 4/19/2012 5:15:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Prakrita. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Prakriti Palchoudhury
Date: 4/19/2012 7:18:00 AM
Hey.Thank you very much, Carol. By the way, it's 'Prakriti' and not 'Prakrita'! Warm Regards, Prakriti.

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