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Calling All Poets

Wake up, wake up, wake up I say. There are words for you to find And your poem is yet to get an end. You slept for too long, Some words are now long gone. Others though still hanging in paintings, Have lost their meanings. Did you not heed my warnings. Quickly, quickly now Let me show you how, While we still have time and your feelings Are still living things. Help save the words and their meanings But you must use them now. Abuse them if you must, But go easy on the lust. Humour them or wet them with your tears, While others still have ears. Whip them if you must, But don't leave too much dust. Just get them in line, While we still have time. I promise you they will shine for other eyes, Even if you lie. There, there don't pull out your hair, We are nearly there. You will soon breathe more lightly here. You have the words in your heart now, Your soul is soaring now, Words are pouring back in now, Their meanings now on show, For everyone to know Take out your polishing cloth It's time for truly beautiful words to come forth and show their true worth. The words are back in focus now. The canvas's are freshly painted now. Just take time to remember, that the new member, Encouraged by the old, will let more words unfold, So their meanings can be told. There will be no more lamenting, The words we lost while we were sleeping. Only new words in numbers beyond counting With meanings in greater number To give us such wonder, As we awaken from our slumber.

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Date: 7/25/2016 7:56:00 AM
An enjoyable read, David. I enjoyed and agree with the challenge you presented. Write on!
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David Smith
Date: 7/27/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Cona. I seem to be in the zone at moment. Don't know where it is all coming from but enjoying the moment. Undoubtedly joining the soup has helped focus some of it. Thanks again for taking time to read my poetry. Best wishes David Smith in NZ
Date: 7/20/2016 8:56:00 AM
Great poetic flow, David, glad you're here on the soup to keep us awake to our potential. Congrats on poem of the day! You may want to rethink the form description as this is not really a blitz, maybe verse? Rhyme?
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Date: 7/20/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thank you John. Appreciate your taking time to comment and for the hint. Still finding my way with categories. Cheers David From NZ
Date: 7/12/2016 5:42:00 AM
Awesome description. Grats on poem of the day too sweets :)
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Date: 7/12/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thank you. Such a positive environment here. Quite a buzz. Funny how my best poems just seem to appear nearly fully prepared in my brain and I write them down word for word without stopping or changing much if anything. Regards David
Date: 7/11/2016 3:11:00 PM
Skillfully written! Congrats on poem of the day!
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David Smith
Date: 7/11/2016 10:58:00 PM
Thanks. Feel I am in zone. At 62 it was time to renew my poetic licence. The company I am keeping on poetry soup has helped. My brain cells need the exercise. My heart feels youthful again. Hope poetry soup is healthy for you too. Best regards David.
Date: 7/11/2016 1:21:00 PM
Congrats on being selected for POTD, what a good choice. A very well written poem.
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David Smith
Date: 7/11/2016 5:32:00 PM
Appreciate your kind thoughts. Feel I am in zone at moment. Normally I start with blank canvas but lately the topic and the words are already waiting impatient for me to start. Best regards David
Date: 7/11/2016 8:23:00 AM
A nice poem. Congrats
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David Smith
Date: 7/11/2016 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Kevin. Will look up your poetry. So much to see. hope you feel welcome on Poetry soup. David from NZ
Date: 7/11/2016 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations David on POTD. Well deserved!
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Date: 7/11/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks. Poets are true keepers of the word. Keep meanings alive and hope and romance. Poetry is great food for the soul. thanks for visiting David from NZ
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David Smith
Date: 7/11/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thanks. Appreciate the visit. Hope you are enjoying the soup. Some great poetry about. Great people too.
Date: 7/11/2016 7:52:00 AM
A wonderful wake up call. Well done.
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Date: 7/11/2016 7:34:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. David ! .... well deserved - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/11/2016 8:19:00 AM
Thanks. Anne-lise. Was not sure if my poetry would be acceptable to so many people from so many backgrounds. Try to keep hope alive in my poetry. Such a fun place to be.on poetry soup. Appreciate your generous comments. David Also never too old for a hug.
Date: 7/10/2016 5:26:00 PM
yes, what a magnificent wake up call it could be if we all united in our voices to wake up the entire world! Awesome message
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David Smith
Date: 7/10/2016 10:28:00 PM
Thank you. Poets keep words as fresh as the morning due. I am in awe of the company I am keeping on poetry soup. Best wishes David
Date: 7/10/2016 11:05:00 AM
We are the harbinger's of sorrow...and scribes of heaven...bringing words of lust-love and lament to the surface...Excellent verse my friend...enjoyed...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/10/2016 10:38:00 PM
Thank you. I am so in awe of the company I am keeping on poetry soup. Glad for chance lay my poetry at your feet. David
Date: 7/10/2016 7:34:00 AM
- Many words are lost ..... in late night hours - When the sun rises .... the meaning is gone - A great poem, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:28:00 AM
Very good ... very interesting ... very appropriate ... all poets should read and be conscious of the words they look up in the prefrontal cortex ...
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Date: 7/10/2016 6:09:00 AM
Thanks for that. Poets keep words alive and hope too I think, and beauty and romance. Gosh the list is long. But a thing done out of love is not a heavy burden. Bless you Victor.

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