California

Last night I heard my luggage call my name It was your voice all so familiar maybe i dreamed of you in California In my dream I caressed your face with the back of my hand and smelled your dark hair I saw the stars flicker in your eyes was it a dream, a dream within you? I saw you I heard your sigh I felt warm damp sheets wrapped around us lost in your embrace I heard you catch your breath felt your heartbeat then heard you sigh again all in a dream of you in California..

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Robin Davis

Date: 3/11/2014 8:42:00 AM

Ken Such a passionate and caring write. Your dream of this girl comes alive and gives you hope she will be in your life one day. Thanks for the great comment on my One Plus One poem.

Ken Carroll
Date: 3/11/2014 11:31:00 AM

thank you Robin..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2013 4:20:00 PM

hi, Kenneth. .. I admire the poem. I know you wrote the poem 2 months ago. However, the poem fits perfectly right now. I love the big feeling of taking a dream a voice, that draws you in to a Texas, gals heart... you never know she might just be from Texas. ..this dream girl. .. I am from Texas, and this poem will go on my bio blog next week... where I showcase favorite poems. luv- linda.

Ken Carroll
Date: 7/29/2013 4:40:00 PM

Hi Linda Paloma, So glad you enjoyed the poem..It was wrote out of poet's imagination at the time..Maybe it served a purpose today...They say dreams come true sometimes..Glad to read from you as usual... Yours, Ken...