Caged

I’m the only one that isn't a lab monkey yet I'm caged too - loneliness abounds 8/27/11

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/8/2011 9:02:00 AM

Stopping by your excellent poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on mine Susan. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/7/2011 11:14:00 AM

Nicely written. yeah, i hate loneliness so much, but the depression feelings it gives me, can be a very powerful words in poems... hahaha... well, God is always fair, i guess. thankfully I don't get much of this time. I enjoyed your poem, Susan

John Freeman

Date: 8/30/2011 9:44:00 PM

Susan, a belated congratulations on your certainly worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 8/29/2011 10:06:00 PM

Congrats Susan on your win...very good approach here.Enjoyed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2011 6:30:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2011 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, susan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2011 3:13:00 PM

Susan, I really hate to see experiments with lab animals as I love animals so much. Very profound thoughts in that second verse. Loneliness IS a cage and it's not easy to break free. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Beam

Date: 8/29/2011 2:13:00 PM

congrats on win enjoyed thanks

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2011 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/28/2011 11:58:00 PM

Good analysis. Congratulations on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2011 11:41:00 PM

Congrats Susan on your wonderful win with this exceptional piece luv.. knew it would be top notch and great win..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2011 7:52:00 PM

powerful piece Susan with an intense message in your lines.. good luck in the contest my friend.. luv.. that title is awesome as right now my emotions are caged.. for a reason luv..

John Smith

Date: 8/28/2011 6:44:00 AM

Monkey around with cages and you can write pages of poetry, literally. Only sages live outside cages and you might be one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2011 1:50:00 AM

ps It's really hard to know what to think about man and monkeys. I sure hope we can understand one day all the scientific evidence on evolution as it relates to creation as the Christian knows it to be.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2011 1:47:00 AM

wow, you did a very profound second senryu, and the first one is really cute except it needs the picture with it so people know you are talking as a monkey! Yes, let's post our poems in the morning. Not much activity going on here. but I guess I'll post mine (if I can wake myself up this morning!) Hope your migraine is gone. LUv,Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/27/2011 8:15:00 PM

Beautiful interpretation of the picture, susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2011 8:02:00 PM

Good comparison..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara