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Caffeine-Free

The day is long My attention's short I've no energy to cavort Business isn't done I'm ready to quit Time feels like a bottomless pit I'm physically here Mind - absentee I shouldn't have drank the caffeine-free

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Harry Horsman

Date: 9/19/2012 10:41:00 AM

wow this another wonder from you. i like your approach to the subject, you write about. thanks for the comments on my stuff. i lived most of my life there in New Zealand for 36 years, i'm from the UK, and now i'm back in the UK. my two sons, one is in Perth Western Australia, and the other is still in Auckland thanks for your interest.. harry

Paloma Walker
Date: 9/19/2012 6:16:00 PM

Thanks! Very nice. I believe I have relatives in Salter Pointe, near Perth? Maybe? Although I have never met them. Very interesting and exciting about where you are from! You must have a wonderful accent :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/20/2011 6:12:00 PM

Ha Ha...I enjoyed it!

Raphael Smith

Date: 7/18/2011 6:24:00 PM

LOL!!!! cute and sooo real...thanks for sharing!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 4:28:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Spanish. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 7:12:00 PM

Creative and interesting expressions , Spanish Rose

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/17/2011 7:04:00 PM

oh no....coffee break anyone??