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they fall upon me, each bent on doing harm I fight them, for what I know now, as my life kicking, stomping, flailing, smashing their fury only increased by the affront of my fruitless attempts to obstruct them this angry little mob, of angry little men a voice rings out, a clarion in the dark that briefly piques their bleak interest shouting, calling, warning, admonishing it falls weakly on their deafened ears pausing just to raise derisive laughs and their assurances to "keep it down" awakening to a doctor's droning voice drolly noting each fracture and contusion defensive wound, defensive wound... as he dictates the inventory of my defeat all I can think of is that voice in the dark demanding some "peace and quiet, damn it"

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Date: 7/25/2015 4:32:00 PM
"their bleak interest" What an interesting description. I really like the way you narrate. Many of you descriptors are very cleverly composed. "doctor's droning voice," "inventory of my defeat," etc. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for posting it.
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David Brown
Date: 7/26/2015 9:48:00 PM
Thank you Preston, that's very kind. Appreciate your comments and look forward to reading your work.

Book: Shattered Sighs