Bye

Years go by so fast, while days take too long. Can't forget the past and all that went wrong. With no end in site, try to hold on or just let go. Such a hard choice I just don't know. Out of place in this world, all alone. My mind's made up, Bye

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2015 11:24:00 PM

this form works perfectly for this kind of theme!! Well done! Just kiss him good bye!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2014 6:41:00 AM

Hold on..Don't leave before you write more wonderful works..Thanks for stopping and I hope that the stop at the bakery was delightful..Sara

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/8/2014 8:16:00 AM

It is worth holding on, Things always get better, life is a teeter totter, sometimes up sometimes down. just keep pushing against the ground and one day you will rise high!

Early Jae
Date: 8/8/2014 5:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for the spectacularly kind words :), I feel the same, "always up or down, never down and out". I've learned putting sadness to paper helps relieve it a bit.