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Bye, But You Still Live On In Me

You left too soon To live by the moon To dine with the sun And smile with the morn Am left now, with double heart I know you left by me, your heart I have now, double feelings I have now, double emotions Two voices, to enhance my screaming And I'll accept that, and take care of it with caution I will get angry twice as normal Smile twice as normal Love with such strength which doesn't exist in the world Care so much, even if my heart can't afford You'll live on in me Forever am you, and you are me I will answer to your name, I'll glee- As you do glee, walk like you walk Talk like you talk smile like you do smile live by your style Because you are me, and am you

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2016 4:31:00 PM

a very interesting. As if living with a ghost!! I enjoyed the read, White Sage.

White Sage
Date: 1/24/2016 4:42:00 PM

thanks Andrea...she's not a ghost anymore....she's an immortal carved into memories...I really appreciate your comments

Kelli White

Date: 1/24/2016 2:55:00 PM

I love this. I am you. You are me. Such is how was meant to be.

White Sage
Date: 1/24/2016 4:15:00 PM

thanks Kelli, am glad you like it

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2016 6:36:00 PM

very interesting one, White sage! Provocative.

White Sage
Date: 1/15/2016 6:48:00 PM

thanks Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/15/2016 10:03:00 AM

how beautifully sad, WS... images run deep, wow!..huggs

White Sage
Date: 1/15/2016 10:31:00 AM

thanks Nette, i appreciate your comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2016 6:35:00 AM

- Lovely written, W.S. :) - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Sage
Date: 1/15/2016 10:22:00 AM

thanks so much Anne

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/14/2016 5:12:00 PM

One wish, one heart, one love...feelings that float within our conscious minds and land gently within our hearts. Emile.

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 6:10:00 PM

thanks Emile...i appreciate your comment

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/14/2016 2:31:00 PM

its the unity that bonds beyond destiny beautifully painted deeply wishing you a blessed weekend ahead

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 2:40:00 PM

thanks Liam...I appreciate your comment

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/14/2016 10:29:00 AM

This is a wonderful way you express love even the beloved is gone. Lovely...:-)

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 11:20:00 AM

thanks Kim, i appreciate your comment

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 1/14/2016 9:04:00 AM

Something of an ode that swells with love. May all your days remain that way; lovely.

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 10:46:00 AM

thanks Iris...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/14/2016 8:31:00 AM

Oneness achieved, love never dies! Majestic m friend, W.S.!

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 10:45:00 AM

thanks Demetrios...the heart's kind of immortal, it always live on in another

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/14/2016 4:57:00 AM

hmmm......written well.

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 10:44:00 AM

thanks...

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 10:43:00 AM

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/14/2016 2:48:00 AM

White sage, lovely message you have here.. touched and thought.. =`) enjoyed the read.. You did great with your collab with Daliah.. keep em up~Olive Eloisa =`)

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 10:40:00 AM

thanks Olive, Dalia is lovely and excellent, having a colaboration with her's great

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/14/2016 2:15:00 AM

I will burn like you burn, I will pray like you pray, and I will love like you love, doubled are my heartbeats...this is what your poem makes me feel and know White Sage...J.A.B.

White Sage
Date: 1/14/2016 10:38:00 AM

thanks Justin...i appreciate your comment

Lin Lane

Date: 1/13/2016 3:44:00 PM

tell me, sage, is it worse to have two hearts, or only half of one? I've never read a poem in which someone has taken the heart of another, I assume through death? If so, it's even more beautiful than at first glance. Very nice.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2016 4:32:00 PM

That's a lovely reply, and one I agree with completely ;)

White Sage
Date: 1/13/2016 4:28:00 PM

having half heart is worse, the emotions will be pieces and not piece...but two heart, is lovely especially when the two hearts are exactly one before the departure of the other...two heart's a great strength