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I remember her and me, on a summer day Sitting on the grass, on the bank of the rill Looking at each other, there’s so much to say With glowing eyes and many stories to tell But I was lost while looking in her hazel eyes And by following every movement of her lips Seeing her long silky brown hair that’s little wavy Sliding down on her shoulders and back And how she looked so soft and tender I was hoping for a breeze but was afraid That It could harm her! Then it’s like if somebody took out the sound jack So I became to hear nothing But was satisfied by just Watching her facial expressions change At first she was smiling and laughing It felt just like heaven But after a while she frowned and got serious But looked like an angry cute little kitty And that made me smile Then she started to raise her eye brows She looked sad And her eyes seemed to be shining….. Not with excitement, but with tears I told myself that I would destroy anything That whatever made her cry I got so angry And then the sound jack was put back in I could hear her crying And could see her warm tears sliding down on her soft cheeks Then I looked up a little to see her crying eyes Oh! Seeing that made my heart break in a million pieces Then I reached out my arm so I can hold her hand in mine And drew closer to her and was about to cry as well Then(with trying to calm her down) I asked: what is the wrong? She replied (looking in my eyes and sobbing): I’ve been talking to you And you weren’t listening! Oh dear! Please forgive me (I should be thrown to the lions!) It’s my fault that…. I let myself be taken away from you, by you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/1/2015 11:58:00 PM
Mohamed, congratulations on your awesome summer time win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/1/2015 7:33:00 AM
Lost in the gazing phase. Well done and captivating writing. The last line is amazing.
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 6/1/2015 4:33:00 PM
Thank you,John, so much and glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 2/3/2015 12:36:00 AM
What a beautiful write, you are so enchanted with her beauty you forgot to listen, Mohamed a 7. Blessings Eve
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 2/3/2015 2:53:00 AM
Thank you Eve so much for your constant support and kind words, very happy you liked it :)
Date: 2/2/2015 9:15:00 PM
Such a very lovely write from beginning to end. Captivating imagery flowing throughout each heartfelt line. I thank you Mohamed for sharing such a precious read.
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 2/2/2015 11:53:00 PM
Thank you Adell so much for your kind words, very happy you liked it :)
Date: 2/1/2015 5:27:00 PM
We will soon have to crown you the King of Romance, this is a beautiful romantic tale, from beginning to end!
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 2/1/2015 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Arthur so much for your kindness , very happy you liked it :)

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