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By the Holy Fire

On those nights I stood long in front of oceans Letting the waves crush violently Under my feet. I used to wait For winds of words to come And carry me So I could breathe the smell of lakes I would warm myself By the holy fire On islands' edges Listening to chants of ancient people Echoing from the depth of caves. On those nights The earth Was not enough for me. I flew too far away Carrying some dreams With tired wings and A few hopes. I was still weak When the storms Thundered in distance. Decades later I realize how painful this voyage was. But to stay Is more painful. For that I left my heart in the winds Of words and dreams.

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Date: 8/23/2020 3:55:00 AM
Khalid This is a gem! You must enter your poems in Poetry soup contests, to realise the full potential of your talent! I am impressed by your poem made of simple beautiful words that carve out a great image! That is what good poetry is about!
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/23/2020 11:55:00 AM
I haven't thought of entering the contests here before. Thanks for your suggestion and your comments:)
Date: 5/3/2019 5:37:00 AM
Beautiful
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 5/3/2019 6:17:00 AM
Thans:)
Date: 5/3/2019 12:03:00 AM
superb poem; love its warmth
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 5/3/2019 6:17:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 9/16/2017 6:26:00 PM
I can feel the warmth of salvation burning the imperfection off of my flesh. Indeed!
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/16/2017 11:42:00 PM
Thank you:)
Date: 9/2/2017 8:23:00 PM
Awesome. Powerful poem. Love it.
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/16/2017 11:42:00 PM
Thank you line,
Date: 9/2/2017 6:22:00 AM
You are a dreamer and have captured the words that many fail to grasp. I have felt the smallness of standing on the shore with relentless waves and then look up and espy the vastness which makes me even smaller. Dream on my friend, and share more with us. God Bless.D.
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/2/2017 9:58:00 AM
Thank you dear Dave, :))
Date: 8/31/2017 8:39:00 AM
And what a melody those words drifting in the wind carried. Touching write.
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/31/2017 12:42:00 PM
Thank you dear Donna :)

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