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By Rainbow's Kiss

And should my life, a flower be Each petal, of a memory I’d find a stem of envied bliss In lush of hue by rainbow’s kiss A bloom of full and rich delight In gratitude, so soft and white Abundant as a garden grows I think back now as I suppose It’s not that thorns have never stung It’s just that song, I haven’t sung For what reflects in morning sun The softest petals, moonlight spun And when my life, as flowers do Begins to fade, not to be blue A lifetime gifted by the Source Will carry me with no remorse

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Date: 5/9/2023 3:54:00 AM
A brilliant description and lovely poem. Well done.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/9/2023 3:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Jeanette xxoo
Date: 5/4/2023 5:39:00 PM
Dear Mike, the metaphorical beauty of your exquisite poem takes my breath away; "And should my life, a flower be / Each petal, of a memory" - wow! ..and "And when my life, as flowers do / Begins to fade, not to be blue" - your verse embraces the heart! Belated congrats for POTD honors and for achieving the top spot on the best new poems list! The many accolades are well-deserved! A stunning piece, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/5/2023 4:31:00 AM
Susan, so very sweet of you to say, thank you so much for your kind words xxoo
Date: 4/21/2023 2:41:00 PM
A beautiful poem and so well written with a lovely flow.Really enjoyed it.Clever and thoughtful.Loved the last lines in particular. Thank you for sharing Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/22/2023 10:54:00 PM
Thanks so much Christina !!
Date: 4/18/2023 6:29:00 PM
I see the hues of 'envied bliss' in this soft and delightful composition...Loved the flow as well! I am short of words to express my appreciation.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/19/2023 4:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Harpreet!!
Date: 4/15/2023 8:40:00 AM
That's for sharing this beautiful piece of you.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/15/2023 10:13:00 AM
Thank you k!!!
Date: 4/14/2023 8:34:00 PM
Bravo!!! Well Witten and nicely penned.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/15/2023 5:53:00 AM
Thank you so much K!!!
Date: 4/14/2023 7:08:00 AM
Back with congratulations Mike on being number one. Have a great weekend. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/14/2023 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Tom and a happy weekend to you !!
Date: 4/13/2023 5:25:00 AM
Mike , Your poem is number one on the best new poems list ! Returning to say congratulations !! Big hugs, Susan xx:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/13/2023 7:34:00 AM
Oh wow, I did not know, that's great!!! Thank you so much Susan xx00
Date: 4/8/2023 9:08:00 AM
A lovely poem, indeed. Missed seeing this as POTD. Congratulations on your well deserved honor, dear Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/13/2023 7:34:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much xxoo
Date: 4/5/2023 10:25:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win, Mike! Beauty in the light of reality. Blessings to you! Happy Easter.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/8/2023 5:05:00 AM
Thank you Sam and Happy Easter to you!
Date: 4/1/2023 4:50:00 AM
A beautiful write, Mike! “It’s not that thorns have never stung“ but you see life with its joy! Congratulations on POTD, Mike!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/1/2023 5:29:00 AM
Thank you Kim, Happy Saturday xxoo
Date: 3/31/2023 5:33:00 PM
Beautiful! A belated congratulations on your POTD....this is a gem. Paulette
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/1/2023 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Paulette xxoo
Date: 3/28/2023 9:25:00 PM
a beautiful poem penned; feel romance here; great to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POTD
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/29/2023 4:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Mahtab!!!
Date: 3/27/2023 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/28/2023 4:02:00 AM
Thank you again xxoo
Date: 3/27/2023 6:30:00 PM
Back again with congratulations for a win in Brian’s contest!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/28/2023 4:02:00 AM
Thank yo so much !
Date: 3/27/2023 4:54:00 PM
Mike, I love the lilt of the rhythm, the garden imagery, and the thoughtful and soothing tone. Congrats for POTD.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/28/2023 4:02:00 AM
Thank you so much John!!
Date: 3/27/2023 4:56:00 AM
Hello Mike, congratulations no the POTD. I love the rainbow. It would be nice if it would stay longer for me to enjoy. Flowers in like a rainbow. Enjoy your Monday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene\ .
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/28/2023 3:16:00 PM
Hello Mike, you are welcome. Happy Tuesday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/28/2023 4:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Darlene and A Happy Tuesday to you xxoo
Date: 3/27/2023 4:51:00 AM
Quite beautiful, Mike! Congratulations on POTD!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/28/2023 4:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim xxoo
Date: 3/27/2023 2:35:00 AM
Congratulations Mike on this POTD. It has such a soothing cadence.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2023 3:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Elizabeth!!
Date: 3/26/2023 11:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well written.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Jeanette!!
Date: 3/26/2023 10:34:00 PM
My congratulations for a lovely poem.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thank you Victor!!
Date: 3/26/2023 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Michael. It is a wonderful honor for this poem. All the best. Blessings.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2023 4:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Sam!!
Date: 3/26/2023 7:19:00 PM
Excellent, Mike, congratulations on POTD:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/27/2023 3:59:00 AM
Thank you Joanna!!
Date: 3/26/2023 5:33:00 PM
POTD worthy indeed, Mike. Just a fine poetic piece. ~:o)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/26/2023 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Arlo!!!
Date: 3/26/2023 4:58:00 PM
Such a beautiful thought. Life being like a flower, each petal a memory. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Mike, on Poem of the Day. Happy Sunday. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/26/2023 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Brandy xxoo
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